I have worked hard to add detail to my ideas.
There before me lay a huge playground with a bridge and a slide.
In the classroom I could see kids playing with some excitement over by the shelves.
I could see computers, stars and plants. I could see the reading corner and blackboard tables.
I felt happy because of the colours shining out through the windows.
Hello Malia l like your story but you could put some more detail.
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